If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional), use the same beginning words and end with the words: "the door swung shut." (also included in the word count)
For those who want an even greater challenge, make your story 200 words EXACTLY!
I have written exactly 200 words in mine! Here it is!
The door swung open. It was Halloween night, lined up at my door were pirates, fairies, and vampires. I handed out candy to all of the creatures. They thanked me and walked off. Gorillas, clowns and skeletons came up to my door saying "Trick or Treat" thinking of the candy they'd be rewarded with. I handed them the last of my candy in the bowl and went back inside to refill. Right as I was about to put heaps and mounds of more candy into the big bowl, the lights started to flicker, the water turned on, the tea kettle started, and the toilet flushed. I quickly grabbed as many pieces of candy as I could and ran to the door alarmed at what had just happened. Before I could get to the open door, something touched me on the shoulder. I turned around, fear in my eyes. All I saw was a small glimpse of fangs and dark red eyes. I screamed and kicked as hard as I could. I screamed again, louder. Then in the corner of my eye I saw a giant black leg lasso a sticky web at the open door. The door swung shut.
The door swung open. It was Halloween night, lined up at my door were pirates, fairies, and vampires. I handed out candy to all of the creatures. They thanked me and walked off. Gorillas, clowns and skeletons came up to my door saying "Trick or Treat" thinking of the candy they'd be rewarded with. I handed them the last of my candy in the bowl and went back inside to refill. Right as I was about to put heaps and mounds of more candy into the big bowl, the lights started to flicker, the water turned on, the tea kettle started, and the toilet flushed. I quickly grabbed as many pieces of candy as I could and ran to the door alarmed at what had just happened. Before I could get to the open door, something touched me on the shoulder. I turned around, fear in my eyes. All I saw was a small glimpse of fangs and dark red eyes. I screamed and kicked as hard as I could. I screamed again, louder. Then in the corner of my eye I saw a giant black leg lasso a sticky web at the open door. The door swung shut.
Oh I love Halloween stories! I'm so glad you wrote a flash fiction piece. Great job and nice to meet you!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nice to meet you too! :)
ReplyDeleteAH! Giant spiders! I know someone who would freak out to a story like this. Me!
ReplyDeleteAwesome work, Alyssa! :)
Great piece, Alyssa; I loved the image of the kettle starting to heat up and the toilet flushing by itself!
ReplyDeleteThanks guys! :D
ReplyDeleteI love Halloween! But I hate spiders, especially giant ones. Great job on an exciting, creepy ending. *shudder*
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
ReplyDeleteLove that you did a Halloween story! I would have run without the candy - eek!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Yeah, I probably would've run without it too! :)
ReplyDeleteooh creepy! Well done. Mine is #72
ReplyDeleteWhat a Halloween! Well done, you're blessed with quite an imagination.
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
ReplyDeleteScary! Really liked the end.
ReplyDelete(I am number 55 on the linky list)
OK! I'll go check it out! :)
ReplyDeleteVery good Alyssa. So glad you have a good imagination, you left everyone in suspense as you ended your story.
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
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